The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate a plan to change a library in 2001 and 2009.
Overall
, over the period both maps have maintained distinct stairs and librarian's desk despite extensive conectructed
computers place.
In 2001, History Place was converted into a kitchen, self-help and economics. Correct your spelling
constructed
Moreover
, tabales
was located in the Correct your spelling
tables
center
of the ground floor Change the spelling
centre
expanded
Wrong verb form
expanding
8
spaces. To the north of the ground floor fiction was relocated to the southwest ground in 2001 and fiction was converted to children's books in 2009. computers were built in the southeast in 2009. librarian's desk, entrance and stairs were maintained in 2001 and 2009 Change preposition
by 8
while
newspapers were converted into films and DVDs. kitchen was built with the aim of cooking or serving food for all the staff.Submitted by salehmiri1995 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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