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The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate a plan to change a library in 2001 and 2009.
Overall
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, over the period both maps have maintained distinct stairs and librarian's desk despite extensive
conectructed
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constructed
 computers place. In 2001, History Place was converted into a kitchen, self-help and economics.
Moreover
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,
tabales
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tables
 was located in the
center
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 of the ground floor
expanded
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8
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spaces. To the north of the ground floor fiction was relocated to the southwest ground in 2001 and fiction was converted to children's books in 2009. computers were built in the southeast in 2009. librarian's desk, entrance and stairs were maintained in 2001 and 2009
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 newspapers were converted into films and DVDs. kitchen was built with the aim of cooking or serving food for all the staff.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-service machines
  • computer stations
  • digital resources
  • book sections
  • fiction, non-fiction, reference
  • café area
  • repositioned
  • user preferences
  • management strategies
  • children's area
  • youth engagement
  • educational activities
  • meeting rooms
  • collaborative spaces
  • community events
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