The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the whole world and in different parts of the world.
The bar chart illustrates the information about the percentage of the
population
living in urban
areas in the whole world
and in different parts of the world
.
To commence with, the graph shows a detailed report of how much population
is staying in
world
the first and foremost is the africa
in Change the capitalization
Africa
year
1950 i is lacking about 15 Change the article
the year
percent
Change the spelling
per cent
while
in the year
2015, it increased to 37 percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
then
drastically increased to 51 per cent
in the coming era 2050. Moving on to the
Asia it was approximately 17 Correct article usage
apply
percent
in 1950 and 41 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015 and suddenly increased to 53 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
in Add a comma
Furthermore,
Europe
the Add a comma
Europe,
population
was seen more as compared to Africa and Asia it was around 51 percent
in 1950 and 72 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015 Change the spelling
per cent
while
78 Correct word choice
and
percent
in 2050. Change the spelling
per cent
Moreover
Add a comma
Moreover,
the
Correct article usage
apply
latin
Change the capitalization
Latin
America
had 42% ofAdd an article
the
population
in the year
1950 while
in 2015 it was approx
78% Rephrase
approximately
while
more increased in 2050 which was 84%.Moreover
in North America
america
, it was seen that 64% was in the Change the capitalization
America
year
1950 while
79% in 2015 and drastically increased to 87% in 2050. Furthermore
, the world
had the least population
in urban areas in 1950 it was 29% while
49% in 2015 and then
60% in 2050.
To sum up
, The lowest population
was crystal clearly observed in the world
and more population
was observed in North America
America
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