The chart below shows the book sales for five different types of fiction books from 2006 to 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below illustrates the
book
sales
for five different types of fiction
books
from the year
2006-to
2010
.
To commence with, The young Correct your spelling
2006 to
adult
gross earnings
in the year
2006 was around 30 billion
while
moving on to classics
it was less then
19 Replace the word
than
billion
.While
the mystery
fiction
book
had more sales
earnings
of approximately 60 billion
and Rommance had a slightly more demand of around 83 billion
.The lowest earning was for sci-fi and fantasy
having just only 19 billion
earnings
.Furthermore
in the Add a comma
Furthermore,
year
2007, both young adult
and classics
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classic
books
were earning 30 billion
while
mystery
had 80 billion
.Romance
had more earnings
which was around 119 billion
which was double as compared to other fiction
books
and the least was again sci-fi and fantasy
20 billion
. Moving on to the year
2008 the least was again young adults and classics
and more was agin the mystery
which was at 57 billion
while
romance
was again 89 billion
sales
earning the least was again the sci-fi and fantasy
which was again at 17 billion
. Furthermore
, in the year
2009, young adult
and the
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apply
classics
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classic books
book
were at the same
earning point and more was mystery
and the again highest was romance
which was at 79 billion
and then
comes the sci-fi-fantasy
which was at 9 billion
.Moreover
, in the year
2010, the young adult
gross earnings
were 25 billion
and classics
were less than 6 billion
then
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than
a
sudden gross Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
earnings
seen for mystery
while
romance
fictionbook
were 89 Correct your spelling
fiction book
billion
and the least was sci-fi and fantasywas
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fantasy was
fantasy as
less
.
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apply
To sum up
, the more sales
of a
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romance
fiction
book
were seen more and least were sci-fi and Fix the agreement mistake
books
fantasy
and the rest fiction
books
were last
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