The table graph illustrates football, basketball, cricket, rugby, and swimming in terms of how many boys in 6-11 and 12-16 took part in these sports in the UK in 2013 Overal
The table graph demonstrates five different sports practised by both adults and juniors in 2013. The sports are swimming,
tennis
, hockey
, basketball and football. Overall
, swimming was the most popular physical training. while
young girls grew a stronger liking for hockey
than any other sport.
To begin
, adults did not have much interest in physical activities, except for swimming and tennis
, which were the most appealing to participate in for adults. Boys, on the other hand
, enjoyed each and every sports type. They favoured swimming and football more frequently and equally. Also
, they were quite active in regard to the rest activities such
as basketball, hockey
and tennis
.
In addition
, swimming had the highest number of attendees, as it was practised by over 150 thousand people. While
hockey
and tennis
shared the same popularity levels with over 100 thousand participants. basketball and football had the least numbers of members, back in 2013.Submitted by besoyam on
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