The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside town of Brinslow between 1990 and 2005.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside town of Brinslow between 1990 and 2005.
The given images illustrate the information about alternations which occurred in Brinslow town from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, the large amount of houses and trees have altered for newly developed infrastructures.
In addition
, all public amenities remained in place. Looking at the
further
details, in the Eastern half, the trees near the river were substituted with an airport.
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The southern rural area was transformed for industrial purposes.
Additionally
, the Western side of
this
half was removed
whereas
horizontal sites stayed the same throughout
this
period. The railway was extended through the maps
along with
the coastline,
while
the Southeastern corner saw a newly constructed ferry. Moving onto the western part of the town, south side houses and trees experienced a relocation of the residential area to the centre of
this
site
while
supermarkets and apartments were built at the initial place. North and northeast of the lake, apartments were replaced by the old house and surroundings.

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