The graphs below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 who were empoyed in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The given bar charts contain information pertaining to the
proportion
of male and female elderly between 60 and 64 who were workers
in four
nations during
1970 and 2000. The figure is shown in percentages.
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between
Overall
, it can be seen that the male employed in two years were more than the female employed in all four
countries. Additionally
, the highest proportion
was Japanese male worker
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workers
during
2000, Change preposition
in
whereas
the opposite was true for women workers
in Belgium during 1970.
Beginning with women, the proportion
of worker
in 2000 Fix the agreement mistake
workers
were
more than the Change the verb form
was
proportion
in 1970 in both Belgium and Japan. In contrast
, the percentages of workers
in 1970 were more than the percentages in 2000 in two remained
countries that speak English. Wrong verb form
remaining
Otherwise
, there were not any big changes in proportion
in four
countries over three decades.
Moving on to the men employed, the proportion
during 2000 were
more than 1970 in all Correct subject-verb agreement
was
four
nations. Additionally
, Japan had the highest proportion
of worker
in two years about 86% and 74% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
workers
Futhermore
, the Correct your spelling
Furthermore
workers
in Belgium had the biggest difference over 30 years that the proportion
in 2000 were
60% higher than the Change the verb form
was
proportion
on
1970.Change preposition
in
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