The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These two maps depict the Norbiton industrial
area
and planned development in the Use synonyms
future
. It is clear from the maps that the industrial Use synonyms
area
will be converted into a housing Use synonyms
area
in the Use synonyms
future
.
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According to
what is shown, all factories will destroy the planned Linking Words
future
. In the Use synonyms
future
, the addition of the street will be built across the river with Use synonyms
T-shape
. Correct article usage
a T-shape
Also
, the street will be constructed in the Southern of Linking Words
mape
. Change the capitalization
Mape
moreover
, many houses will be built in different areas. Linking Words
Further
, many Linking Words
faclties
will be established Correct your spelling
facilities
to
people living there easily Change preposition
for
sach
as shops, medical Correct your spelling
such
centre
, schools and Fix the agreement mistake
centres
playground
. From these maps, the farmland will be replaced from the southern to Fix the agreement mistake
playgrounds
western
Add an article
the western
area
.
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To sum up
, we could say that Linking Words
this
Linking Words
area
will develop to be a living Use synonyms
area
for many people Use synonyms
instead
of an industrial Linking Words
area
.Use synonyms
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