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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in the line graph is information pertaining to the UK's level of
production
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 of three main fuels from 1981 to 2000. It can
also
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 be noted that the measurement was Energy Unit (
EU
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)
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, it can be seen that Petroleum and Natural gas
production
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 increased
while
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 it was the opposite for coal.
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, Petroleum remained the highest
production
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 throughout the period. Beginning with Petroleum, factories produced around 90
EU
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 in 1981, after that it increased significantly and reached its peak at about 140
EU
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 in 1986 before dropping to about 100
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 in 1991. It
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 witnessed an upward trend to exactly 140
EU
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 in 2000. Regarding Natural gas, its
production
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 stood at under 40
EU
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 in 1981 before increasing gradually to approximately 100
EU
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 in 2000. Turning to the remaining fuel, its
production
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 accounted for 80
EU
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 at the beginning before seeing a downward trend to 60
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 in 1986.
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 was followed by a continuous decrease to around 30
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at the end
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 of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, eu with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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