The table shows the number of employees and factories producing silk in England and Wales between 1851 and 1901.
The given table illustrates the
number
of workers
and factories
in the silk production industry in 2 regions, England and Wales, from 1851 to 1901.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were always more females than males who worked in the silk
factories
over the provided period. Additionally
, although
the number
of factories
increased, the
total number
of people working in the silk industry fell.
Regarding the first 3 decades, the number
of factories
in 1851 was 272, with almost 54.000 male workers
and 76.786 female workers
. After 10 years, the factories
nearly tripled in number
, while
both the male and female workforce dropped by approximately 11.000 and 8.000 workers
, respectively. From 1861 to 1871, there was a reduction in the number
of factories
at
only 693 in 1871, it was similar for the Change preposition
to
number
of employees where
there was Correct word choice
but
also
a fall to 38.102 for males and 53.310 for females.
Looking at the following 30 years, there was a slight increase in the number
of factories
from 1871 to 1881, however
, it continued to go down for the rest of the period with only 623 factories
in 1901. Meanwhile, although
the number
of men
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male
workers
went up slightly to 28.689 by 1891, the women kept decreasing to about 25.500 at the end
of the period.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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