Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their works from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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the advancement of technology nowadays,

works

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now can be done at home

instead

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of

offices

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in offices

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and many people think that

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phenomenom

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phenomenon

should be encouraged because of its benefits. Personally,

i

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firmly agree with

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point of view for its convenient and effective.

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with, there are several reasons why people should

work

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at

homes

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home

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. The first justification is that

workers

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will have more time to do their

work

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because they will not have to go to the offices every

mornings

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like they used to be as they can just wake up early and do the job

when ever

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whenever

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they like.

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,

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work

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working

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at home will give them

the

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atmosphere which is conducive to relaxation rather than the pressure atmosphere at the office

due to

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the director's disparaging remarks.

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, when the

workers

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make a mistake in their projects, they will not only receive

a disparaging remarks

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disparaging remarks

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from their manager but

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also

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apply

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their

feeling

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feelings

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will be affected badly

too

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apply

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.

Additionallly

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Additionally

, when

emloyees

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employees

prefer to

work

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at

homes

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home

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will make

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the company's electricity expenditure

decrease

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decreases

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and

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workers

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will

work

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with a positive mindset

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the absence of strict adherence to company regulations.

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, they can wear their pyjamas and

work

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, which

is very relax

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is very relaxing

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for them. In conclusion,

i

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I

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believe that working at

homes

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home

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will not only bring many advantages for

workers

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and employees but

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will make the

financial

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finances

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ò the company increase.