​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

​​The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs below illustrate the average consumption of feed around the world in 2008
in contrast
to two countries
such
as
China
and India.
Overall
, it can be seen from the pie charts ,that processed food with vegetables and fruits accounted large percentage in all three categories, unlike other feeds. Looking at the details , we can find out that consumption in the world and India have their own similarities. In both, animal foodstuff and processed meals have a single result with a difference of one or two per cent.
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vegetables and fruits in
China
and in the world are approximately 30%.
China
is the only country in which nuts and seeds with 19% supersede food from animals with 15%.
Whereas
in global consumption nuts and bolts take the latest place with 4% and in India with 11%.
Additionally
, in
China
, processed bread does not reach 35%
in contrast
to others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average consumption
  • Global composition
  • Food category
  • Meat, vegetables, fruits, grains
  • Percentage, proportion
  • Comparative analysis
  • Similarities and differences
  • Intake, consumption patterns
  • Striking differences
  • Notable similarities
  • Higher/lower consumption
  • Significant difference
  • Proportionate share
  • Relevant comparison
  • General trend
  • Insight
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