The graphs below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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both genders taking a variety of types of cosmetic

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in Korea in the year 2004.

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Korean people are intrigued by Hair transplantation

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a small group of them tend to perform the

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type Facelt.

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with, the total of Hair transplantation was a gigantic 60,000 in 2004 followed by Laser Skin Resurfacing which occupied an enormous 55,000.

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, the Rhinoplasty

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was in third place and represented a massive 40,000. What is interesting to note is the difference between the

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and the third place was approximately 1.5 times.

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, the population taking Abdominoplasty was roughly a nominal 18,000;

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the

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type Facelt came in final place with a minuscule 16,000. What is surprising to see is both

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two places were different from each other by only a meagre 2,000.