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The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetable per day in the uk from 2001 to 2008
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The chart gives information about the proportion of
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 who ate 5 per
cent
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fruit and vegetables each day in the
Uk
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UK
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 between 2001 and 2008.
Overall
, the cart illustrated three categories
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children
,
female
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females
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 and
male
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males
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 who usually
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 fruit and
vegetable
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vegetables
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 every day
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 a week . It
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can be seen that in the picture in
2006
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2006,
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 the women's rate was the highest per
cent
in contrast
 during of three years from 2001 to 2003 the children's rate was the lowest
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portion
.
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Generally
 speaking , the figure
of
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 women
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increased gradually
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and
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 to top
per
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cent
 in the year 2006 it was
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35% after that , it down
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 the end of
period
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 . On the
onther
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other
hand
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 the number of
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men
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 and
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children
 was
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 in the first three years in the chart
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in addition
 they remained stale
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rose dramatically until in the year 2007
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 the men and the children
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 downwards slightly to reach above 25% and under twenty-five per
cent
 respectively.
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