The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture illustrates the steps involved in producing

sugar

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from

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cane. There are seven steps in the process from growing

sugar

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canes

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to drying and cooling

sugar

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. First of all,

sugar

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cane

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canes

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cane

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have

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grown for twelve to eighteen months. After

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it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves first and

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chopping the

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,

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the mechanized method uses machines to cut the

canes

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directly.

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that the

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canes

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are crushed in a mill to extract the juice.

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the juice is purified in

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filter and

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, the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water to become syrup. At

this

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point, the syrup is

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poured into a centrifuge where it is spun at high speed. in

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a way that the

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crystals are separated from

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the syrup

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. The

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step is that the

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is dried and cooled.