The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the steps involved in producing
sugar
from sugar
cane.
There are seven steps in the process from growing sugar
canes
to drying and cooling Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
.
First of all, sugar
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
canes
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
have
grown for twelve to eighteen months. After Correct subject-verb agreement
has
that
it is harvested either manually or mechanically. The manual method involves farmers removing the leaves first and Add a comma
that,
then
chopping the canes
, while
the mechanized method uses machines to cut the canes
directly. The following step is
that the sugar
canes
are crushed in a mill to extract the juice.
Subsequently
the juice is purified in Add a comma
Subsequently,
limestone
filter and Correct article usage
a limestone
then
, the purified juice is boiled in an evaporator to remove water to become syrup. At this
point, the syrup is then
poured into a centrifuge where it is spun at high speed. in such
a way that the sugar
crystals are separated from syrup
. The Add an article
the syrup
last
step is that the sugar
is dried and cooled.Submitted by abhari1997 on
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