The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph provides data about the number of people who were employed in different sectors of

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in Britain over the decade in question.

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, it can be seen that

while

private

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the private

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sector

was the most important

section

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sector

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in 2000, it witnessed

downward

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a downward

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trend over the

period

, and hit the bottom line in 2010. As for

public

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the public

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and self-employed sectors, they saw an upward trend during the decade

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and were more popular than

private

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the private

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sector

finally

. Looking at the details, despite less than half of people in the UK

were

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employed in the private

sector

in 2000,

this

rate fell gradually by 30%

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and hit the bottom line

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around 20% in 2010. If we look at the self-employed

sector

, having fluctuated in the first half of the

period

, it

then

recovered and grew

up

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slightly in the second half of the

period

, and ended up at just about 30%. Regarding

public

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the public

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sector

, it started at approximately 30%, and after experiencing fluctuation over the

period

, it was the most important section in 2010, which meant more than

around

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50% of people were employed in

this

sector

.