The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarize and information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams show the processes and the
equipments
used to make Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
cement
, and how these are used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first step in the cement
productios
is to introduce limestone clay. These materials pass through a crusher that produces a powder. Correct your spelling
products
Then
this
powder goes into a mixer. After
this
, the product passes to a rotating heater which works with heat. Afterwards, the mixture goes into a ginder
where the Correct your spelling
grinder
cement
comes out. At the end
of the process, the cement
is packed in bags.
Referring to the concret
production, the process begins with a combination of 15% Correct your spelling
concrete
concert
cement
, 10% water, 25% and
sand 50% gravel. These four elements are introduced into a concrete mixer.
As mentioned above, Correct word choice
apply
the
concrete production takes fewer steps Correct article usage
apply
that
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than
the
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apply
cement
production, however
, it is necessary to use more materials than the latter process in order to obtain the final product.
The last
difference between both processes is that the concrete mixer does not work with heat.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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