The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries: China and India. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The above pie chart illustrates the average
consumption
of food
in the year 2008. The chart depicted consumption
patterns in the world
in comparison with the two most populated countries namely, India and China.
Overall
, the world
's consumption
of food
and Indian food
patterns are similar in nature with major food
sources as processed food
. However
, the primary food
items in China are processed food
vegetables and fruits.
According to
the statistics, processed food
is the prominent food
item
among all which has 41 per cent intake in global level, 34 per cent consumption
rate in China and 39 per cent in India as well. Next come vegetables and fruits which have a consumption
rate of 32% among Chinese people which seem to be a main course item
. But it is not that influential in the global market and in the case of Indians as well. Animal food
has 26% consumption
at the world
level whereas
15% is consumed among Chinese which is the least preferred food
for them. On the other hand
, Indians have a 27% consumption
rate which is the second most consumed food
item
among them. Nuts and seeds are the least eaten food
item
in the world
and among Indians but it is one of the competitive foods for Chinese people.Submitted by praneeth2094 on
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