The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Presented for consideration are two graphs illustrating the proportion of films which were released and sales of
tickets
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in cinema in a specific nation between 1996 and 2006.  
Overall
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, it is evident that the percentage in most types of films released witnessed an upward trajectory, except Romance, where it remained unchanged throughout the timeframe.
Additionally
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, the total of
tickets
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sold for Drama, Comedy and Fantasy saw an increase,
while
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Romance continuously was the opposite.  Beginning with the proportion of films launched, Drama saw the biggest rise from over 25% to exactly 35%. Behind
this
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level, Comedy accounted for 20% in 1996 and
then
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went through an upward trend, reporting 25% in 2000.
Subsequently
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, Fantasy experienced an increase from approximately 12% to more than 15%,
while
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Romance stood at over 5% for both years. Moving on to the proportion of
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sold, Comedy always was the highest throughout the period, starting at 20% before going up to 23%. With respect to Drama, its number of
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saw a slight increase, when it stood at 16%
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rose to nearly 17%. In reference to Fantasy, there was a doubled rise, from 3% to 6%.
By contrast
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, Romance’s
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saw a downward trajectory to 2% from 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tickets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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