The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in the charts is information pertaining to the proportion of workers in three fields broken down by gender in two different countries.
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, it can be seen that Service was the field most labour workers joined.
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, Industry was seen as the lowest percentage of workers in
country
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A,
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the opposite was seen in agriculture in
Country
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B. Beginning with
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A, 56% of males and 49% of females worked in services. Below that was agriculture with 29% of male participants and 43% of women. Regarding the field with the lowest percentage of people, men just accounted for 15%, double that of women. Turning to
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B, services were
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the field with the highest proportion of participants with 65% in male counterparts and 88% in females. With regard to Industries, 32% of men took part in
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major with 32%, nearly tripled than that of females. In reference to agriculture, the percentage of the labour workforce was just around 1% and 3% in both genders.
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