You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the average monthly temperatures in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the mean
temperature
in three different capital cities in the world in 12 months. The unit in the Y-axis was shown in
degree
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Celcius.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the trends of Paris and Dubai are the same, like a mountain,
while
Sydney is reversed.
Moreover
, the
temperature
in Dubai
almost
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the highest throughout the year
whereas
Paris is the coolest.
To begin
with, the average
temperature
in Dubai started at 19 and continuously shot up to an enormous 31 in May;
as well as
moderately inclining to reach its peak at a gigantic 36 in Aug. A dramatic drop was seen after Aug and ended at nearly 21 in Dec.
Furthermore
, Paris which was at a minuscule 5 in the first month surged to 20 and remained constant at
this
level for one month before significantly nosediving to 5 again in Dec. What is interesting to note is that the gaps of monthly
temperature
between these two cities were approximately 4 times.
Additionally
, the Sydney average
temperature
began at a massive 24 and gradually decreased to the minimum point in Jul, with roughly 14, and soared to a large 23 in Dec. What is surprising to see is that the maximum was more than the minimum points by 10.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly temperature
  • major cities
  • trends
  • temperature changes
  • comparisons
  • yearly pattern
  • geographical location
  • climate zones
  • significant variations
  • notable differences
  • peak temperatures
  • lowest temperatures
  • fluctuations
  • seasonal changes
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