Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuess both these views and give your own opinion.

For many years majority of

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desire to

study

a broad university curriculum that covers various subjects and its opposition to the other group of

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learners

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whose

preferance

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preference

lies in having a focused

study

on their chosen qualification, has been the central topic of many heated debates. Having carefully examined the logic behind both perspectives, I, personally, believe the best path lies

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in between. On the one hand, having the opportunity to step into

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divergent

fields of

study

while

studying at a university, can bring about many potential benefits; among which being

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capable

of growing a

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multi-dimensional

perspective towards the existing problems is, undoubtedly, of great importance. A broad curriculum,

in other words

, will provide learners with a wider view of the world which,

subsequently

, will result in them having the ability to engage in a

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multi-disciplinary

approach to find creative solutions to the existing problems which, in fact, is what

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separates

humans' work from

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machines

.

However

, it is understandable that some students tend to participate in in-depth

study

plans that,

according to

their view, will assist them by cultivating a profound knowledge in an area. Which will,

as a result

, make them the

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expertise

of a field. It goes without saying that the laser-focused curriculums,

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inevitably

, leave learners with a conclusive and valuable knowledge of their

qualification

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, which

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, offers a narrow look, meaning, They are able to look at things from a single perspective. In conclusion, both mentioned views towards learners' opportunity to

study

different subjects throughout their university years, have merit.

However

, I personally believe, the best path is far from

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these

two extremes.

Therefore

, a well-structured curriculum offering both through courses in one's chosen course

along with

some wisely selected additional subjects

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will best cater to student's needs.