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The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.

The line graph below shows the production of paper, wood pulp and sawn-wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000.
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The line graph depicts
forest
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the forest
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 industry in the UK in terms of how much
paper
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,
wood
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 pulp and
sawn
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wood
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 was manufactured over
20-year
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a 20-year
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 timescale from 1980 to 2000. Broadly, the amount of
paper
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 & packaging production exhibited a consistent upward trajectory, whilst a reverse pattern could be seen in that of
wood
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 pulp and
sawn
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wood
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.
Paper
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 & packaging, notably, was by far the most widespread production throughout the entire duration. In 1980, the production of
paper
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 & packaging took the lead, amounting to 230 million
tons
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, which was marginally higher than its counterpart –
sawn
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wood
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, comprising exactly 200 million
tons
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.
Subsequently
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, the figure for
paper
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 & packaging recorded a substantial ascend, culminating in a peak of 350 million
tons
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whereas
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 a noticeable dip was witnessed in the statistics for
sawn
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wood
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, hitting a low of somewhere in the vicinity of 125,000
thousand
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tons
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 by the termination of the period. Commencing from 1980, approximately 170,000
thousand
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tons
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 of
wood
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 pulp was produced, hitting the lowest point in the initial year, after which it declined moderately to precisely 150,000
thousand
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tons
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 in 1990. Fortunately, it gathered pace and made a recovery to around 160,000
thousand
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tons
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at the end
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 of the surveyed period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, wood, sawn, tons, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • production
  • paper
  • wood pulp
  • sawn-wood
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • trend
  • significant
  • turning point
  • correlation
  • inverse relationship
  • environmental policy
  • demand
  • technological advancements
  • implications
  • projections
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