You have seen an advertisement for a weekend course to study a foreign language. Write a letter to the institution offering the course. In your letter: ask for details of the course ask if the course teachers are qualified native speakers request that the institution sends you their brochure. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam,... Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you regarding
advertisement
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an advertisement
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I have found on
instagram
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, I would like to know more about
course
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the course
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study a foreign language.
To begin
with, can you tell me some
infomations
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information
about the
course
and I would like
if
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it if
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you
explain
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explained
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details
such
as
,
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apply
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the cost, study methods, and how long we will
get
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have
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time
for
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to
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study.
Therefore
I want to know more details about the
course
.
In addition
, regarding
a teachers
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a teacher
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at
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in
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the
course
, whether they are
a
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apply
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native
speaker
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speakers
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who
has been
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have
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excellent
qualification
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qualifications
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.
As a result
, it will be
infleunce
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influenced
influence
to students if the
course
provide
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provides
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it. I need some
informations
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information
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that I can know , probably you can give me a brochure,
that is
why I can read about the
course
and it will be necessary for me.
Therefore
will
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apply
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you can send
to
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it to
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me via
Whatsapp
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regarding the brochure. Thank you so much, I am looking forward to hearing you soon Yours
sincerenly
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sincerely
Levi
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task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task by asking for course details, inquiring about the qualifications of the teachers, and requesting a brochure. However, some parts could be more clearly articulated. For example, you could be more specific about the type of information you want in the brochure.
coherence cohesion
Some paragraphs could be organized better for improved coherence and clarity. For example, combining the request for course details and duration into a single paragraph would make it clearer and easier to follow.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is appropriate and polite, which is suitable for a formal request.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are clear and appropriate, which contributes to the overall professionalism of the letter.
coherence cohesion
You included separate ideas in different paragraphs, which helps maintain clarity.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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