The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the world's ten most expensive countries for petrol along with other financial information.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the 10 countries less cheap in
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of
petrol
, the case study is broken down into 3 columns: 2 different types of monthly averages, disposable
income
and
petrol
expenditure, plus 1 column for monthly
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income
icome
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income
spent on
petrol
. Norway, Turkey and Holland are the countries that
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had
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spent more money
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petrol
(319.85, 315.96 and 288.65 respectively).
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, their percentages of monthly
income
spent on
petrol
are not the highest
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except
Turkey
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. Eritrea generally spent more than 60% of her disposable
income
, followed by Turkey with almost 35% and Greece with
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approximately
25%. The biggest amount of disposable
income
is of Norway with
an
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monthly average of $ 4329.07,
then
Sweden with 3548.81 immediately followed by Denmark with $ 1 thousand less.
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, we can see that the richest countries are not the same
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that
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more money on
petrol
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petrol, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geographical distribution
  • per capita income
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • correlate
  • anomalies
  • impact
  • cost of living
  • transportation
  • external factors
  • oil production rates
  • import dependencies
  • subsidies
  • taxation policies
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