The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
#children #age #group #percentage #population #kingdom #summarise #information #features #comparisons
the line graph compares the proportion of 4 different young age groups (0-4 , 5-9, 10-14 , 15-19)which lived in
UK
between 1990 and 2001.
it is evident that the 15-19 and 5-9 age groups saw considerable fluctuations in the young population, with Correct article usage
the UK
low
during the 2000s, Correct article usage
a low
while
the 10-14 age dramatically increased between 1990 to 2001, and the 0-4 significantly went down.
the percentage of population the 0-4started at under 26% and next rose to 26.5% slightly until 1992 after that figure went down significantly, finishing at almost 23.5%. if we look at the 5-9 ages
, having increased marginally to approximately 26 % in1997, decreased sharply, reaching nearly 25% in2001.
At the beginning of the period, ages
between 15 to 19 have the highest point at about 26.3 per cent, which is much higher than ages
between 10-14 at around 23.1 per cent. Before rising gradually from 1994 to 2001, ages
between 15 to 19 saw a significant decline from 1990 to 1994.Submitted by poriaprashidi on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Add more linking words.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words ages with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!