The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village lberaries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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that were borrowed in four villages in 2014 over the time period of four months.

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it is clear that

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the library's lines had increased in all the villages except Ryeslip.

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, fiction

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had the maximum number.

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, the Sutton Wood area increased a little bit in June and fell dramatically in July from 270 to 100 and

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in August, it rose significantly and reached 300.

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, both Church Mount and West Eaton rose slightly until 150. And

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, the Ryeslip area declined smoothly from 300 to around 170.

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, as we can see in the pie chart, 45% borrowed fiction

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and 19% borrowed biography

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, history and science

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were in the third place and similar with each other with a number of 14%. The minimum figure was for self-help

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with 10%.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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