The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
peeping at the stats table, we're breaking down how unemployed folks in the UK spend their
time
, split by activities and genders over the past year. Basically, it's a lot of indoor stuff like chores and job hunting, but gardening and binge-watching TV stand out for both guys and gals. Fun fact: women
ain't
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big on snoozing or sports come afternoon. Housework eats up a chunk of
time
, ranging from 19% to a whopping 49%,
while
dudes are barely doing anything in the afternoons, just 7%. Shopping and job hunting tag along, taking up about 9% to 26% of everyone's
time
.
Then
there's hanging out, gardening, TV
time
, and reading, bouncing around from 6% to 17%. But gardening and TV? They're on a bit of a slide, dropping
to
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2% to 4%. Plus, lots of activities are in the same ballpark, usually chilling between 4% and 9%. But things like lounging in bed, sports, and boozing get the cold shoulder, with folks only throwing about 0% to 4% of their
time
at
'em
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them
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. Oh, and both guys and gals seem to like their morning lie-ins.
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