The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in the chart is the comparison between the recycling percentage of four distinct wastes recorded in a specific nation during the 28-year period, starting from 1982.
From an observational perspective,
paper
and
Correct word choice
apply
cardboard
and glass
containers experienced a slightly upward trend while
aluminium cans witnessed a considerable one. Additionally
, paper
and cardboard
was
the most common Correct subject-verb agreement
were
material
to be recycled Fix the agreement mistake
materials
whereas
the opposite was true for plastics.
Looking at the illustration in further
detail, it can be seen that around 65% of paper
and cardboard
was recycled in 1982 and it increased to 70% in 1986 before dropping back to 65% in 1990. Similarly
, there was a steady decline for glass
containers, from a
half to 40%. From 1990 to 1994, both Correct article usage
apply
paper
and cardboard
and glass
container
saw a rise Fix the agreement mistake
containers
by
15% and 10% respectively. Change preposition
of
However
, throughout the following timeframe, paper
and cardboard
decreased continuosly
to 70% Correct your spelling
continuously
whilst
an increase Change preposition
with
by
10% for Change preposition
of
glass
containers.
Turning to the remaining categories, aluminium cans began at approximately 5% and shot up to more than 40% at the end
of the report. Regarding to
plastic, there was a slow rise, from 5% to just under 10%.Remove the preposition
apply
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