The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares eight types of spending in terms of the weekly income of households in a certain country in 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, families in 1968 spent the largest proportion of their income in
food, and Change preposition
on
this
percentage far outweigh
other spending categories. But in 2018, people tend to distribute their income more equally, in comparison with 40 years ago.
In 1968, Wrong verb form
outweighed
in
average, a family spent 35% money to buy food, but Change preposition
on
this
proportion fell to approximately 17.5% in 2018. In contrast
, the figure for housing and transport almost doubled, from 10% to just under 20%, 8
% to 14%, respectively. And spending Correct word choice
and 8
in
leisure activities shows the largest increase by around 13% over the Change preposition
on
40 years
period.
Data of Correct your spelling
40-year
others
categories changed relatively little. Families' weekly spending Correct quantifier usage
other
in
household goods remained unchanged at 8%. Money allocated to fuel and power was 6% in 1968 and 4% in 2018. Change preposition
on
Finally
, the figure for 'clothing and footware
' and 'Personal goods' both Correct your spelling
footwear
had
fell by about 5% 40 years later, from 10% to 5% and 8% to 4%, respectively.Unnecessary verb
apply
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