The bar and line chart below shows average monthly temperatures and bathing suit sales in New York for the first 6 months of 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
chart illustrates two different types of information, the average temperatures with a line while
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and
revenue
(US$) in bars, all the numbers are justified by six different months, from January to June
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The information testifies how bathing suit sales and temperature figures had changed in 2012 in New York.
As we can see from January to March the revenue
had
increased with the same rhythm ($ 100.000, $ 150.000 and $ 200.000 respectively). Unnecessary verb
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At
the same period the average temperatures, Change preposition
During
express
in Wrong verb form
expressed
fahrenheit
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Fahrenheit
unit
, had fluctuated a bit, in January the temperature was approximately 32 degrees Fix the agreement mistake
units
while
in
February 30 and March almost 40 degrees.
From April to Change the preposition
on
June
the bars had
achieved the major and the minor Unnecessary verb
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point
in terms of Fix the agreement mistake
points
incomes
. In April the Fix the agreement mistake
income
revenue
bar was just under the ax
of $ 300.000, in May the bar was just Change the spelling
axe
one third
of the previous month but three times Add a hyphen
one-third
the
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June
's bar, which means that in June
the revenue
almost touched the bottom of the graph, thus
$ 0. Whereas
, the temperature line had
kept Unnecessary verb
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to increase
from February to Change the verb form
increasing
June
where it was recorded more
or less 65 Change preposition
as more
fahrenheit
degrees.Change the capitalization
Fahrenheit
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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