The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and other graduates who got full-time job after graduating from a university in Australia, and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012.

The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and other graduates who got full-time job after graduating from a university in Australia, and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012.
The graphs illustrate the proportion of having full-time employment after graduating from
math
learners and other studies and the average budget of
two
types
of graduation between 2004 and 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
two
percentages of
types
of students having jobs concentrated to decrease over time, and
math
graduates' salaries were outstanding. Having looked at the given line graph, in 2004, the rate of
math
scholars was 80% more than other collegians by nearly 12%. After
two
years, the figure of
math
students having careers rocketed by approximately 20%,
while
the other-pupil ratio just fluctuated to 81%. In 2008, the
quantity
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of
types
of students reached 83%. From there, both percentages declined and peaked at 79% and 68%, respectively, in 2012. Related to the amount earned, in 2004, both levels of income were $41,000 and went up to $43,000 in 2006.
Two
years later, the salary of
math
scholars rose to $50,000 more than other collegians by $5,000. In 2010, the number of
types
of studies grew by 1,000 and 2,000 dollars, respectively. After
two
years, the budget of other graduates was $51,000 lower than
math
learners by 5,000 dollars
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