The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The chart illustrates how much
electricity
was produced and consumed in the ten biggest
countries
in the world in 2014.
First,
the biggest consumer and producer of
electricity
was
China
, followed by the US. In
China
, the
production
was 5398
billion
kWh
and
consumption
were
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50
billion
kWh
less.
However
, in the US, the gap between
production
and
consumption
accounted for approximately 200
billion
kWh
, between 4099 and 3866
billion
kWh
respectively.
Secondly
, Germany was the only location where the
electricity
was 10% more used than produced, 526
billion
kWh
compared with 582
billion
kWh
.
Finally
, Korea was the
last
among the top ten
countries
, with 485
billion
kWh
production
and 449
billion
kWh
consumption
figures, which accounted for 10% of
China
's statistics,
while
the rest of the
countries
varied from around 10% to 20%.
Overall
, there was a disparity in the creation and usage of
electricity
between the
countries
, when
China
and the United States were two-thirds and all the rest eight
countries
only one-third of the total
electricity
industry, and only in Germany did the
consumption
overpass
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the
production
figures.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, countries, china, production, billion, kwh, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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