The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture demonstrates the developments that are about to occur in the
centre
of a small town, namely Islip.
Overall
, it is evident that the main road will be reconstructed into a dual carriageway to bring convenient access to residents.
Furthermore
, more residential areas will be introduced to the region. Looking at the northern side of the map, the upper row of shops will be completely replaced with a great shopping
centre
, a car park, a bus station, and a new housing area.
Moreover
, the countryside is going to be demolished to make way for the road construction. Just to the south of
this
area, is where the main road is located, which is going to be replaced with a pathway specifically built for pedestrians. At the
centre
of the map,
however
, the other row of shops remains in the same place, to the south of which a new housing will be introduced
in addition
to the previous one.
Additionally
, the school's and the residential area's place in the southern region of the map, whilst being separated from the other parts of the
centre
by the southern carriageway, will remain unchanged.
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