Writing Task 1 The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Writing Task 1

The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007.

Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of weekly working hours for both genders in Australia in 2007.
Overall
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it is clear that
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people who are around 30-50 years old spend time
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working the most.
Moreover
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, the trends between the younger generation and the older generation are reversed.
To begin
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with, looking at male citizens, the fraction of hours worked by male adults(30-50) occupied a gigantic 43% followed by seniors(60-80), with an enormous 30%.
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, elderly people represented 10 and the youngest group accounted for 5%. What is interesting to note is the percentage of the elderly was more than the seniors by 3 times.
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, the ratio of female adults remained in first place, with a massive 35%. The senior group, which was 18%, was surpassed by teenagers, which registered 22%.
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, the proportion of the female oldest group remained at the same level as the males, at 10%. What is surprising to see is the difference between the youngest and the adults was approximately 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Hours worked
  • Overall trend
  • Significant differences
  • Similarities
  • Peaks
  • Full-time
  • Part-time
  • Overtime
  • Proportion
  • Represented
  • Categories
  • Variations
  • Societal roles
  • National employment policies
  • Predominantly
  • Engaging in
  • Comparison
  • Domestic duties
  • Employment trends
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