Writing Task 1 The bar chart shows the number of hours worked by men & women per week in Australia in 2007. Summarise information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of weekly working hours for both genders in Australia in 2007.
Overall
, it is clear that
people who are around 30-50 years old spend time on
working the most. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the trends between the younger generation and the older generation are reversed.
To begin
with, looking at male citizens, the fraction of hours worked by male adults(30-50) occupied a gigantic 43% followed by seniors(60-80), with an enormous 30%. Furthermore
, elderly people represented 10 and the youngest group accounted for 5%. What is interesting to note is the percentage of the elderly was more than the seniors by 3 times.
On the other hand
, the ratio of female adults remained in first place, with a massive 35%. The senior group, which was 18%, was surpassed by teenagers, which registered 22%. Besides
, the proportion of the female oldest group remained at the same level as the males, at 10%. What is surprising to see is the difference between the youngest and the adults was approximately 2 times.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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