Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
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it is widely claimed that the best solutions
is to accept bad Fix the agreement mistake
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situation
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situations
such
as jobs or shortage of money sometimes, others argue that the struggle to improve such
situation
is better. Both points of view and reasons why I agree with the latter statement will be elaborated on in Fix the agreement mistake
situations
this
essay.
To begin
with, it seem
sensible for some to believe that some Change the verb form
seems
situation
have Fix the agreement mistake
situations
variety
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a variety
ways
of resolving Change preposition
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it
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them
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is possibly
because they have the potential to overcome Replace the adverb
possible
such
hassles. Take inadequate of
finances, Change preposition
apply
for example
; there are countless solutions to take into an
account Correct article usage
apply
such
as find
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finding
a
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apply
better paid
jobs, Add a hyphen
better-paid
reduce
costs of Wrong verb form
reducing
nonsensicle
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nonsensical
spendings
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spending
borrowing
money from either family members or financial Correct word choice
and borrowing
institutes
.
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institutions
opponent
of Change to a plural noun
opponents
this
idea might opposed
that some situations that Change the verb form
oppose
be opposed
involved
numerous uncontrolled factors could make the Wrong verb form
involve
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gone
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leave
no other Correct subject-verb agreement
leaves
choices
but to just accept it. Fix the agreement mistake
choice
For instance
, getting robbed, if lucky enough you would get your valuables back. But whatif
you did everything you could but still cannot Correct your spelling
what if
retrieved
it back? the only way to Change the verb form
retrieve
dealt
with could be to just accept it and Change the form of the verb
deal
moving
on.
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However
, I personally argue in favour of figuring out ways
to overcome such
situation
seeing that
there Correct article usage
a situation
always
a solution Add a missing verb
is always
in
every problem. As the wise one once said; where there is a will, there is a way, people will always find Change preposition
to
ways
to solve things if there is enough passion.
In conclusion, although
it is undeniable that in
some point all you have to accept Change preposition
at
it
for unwanted Correct your spelling
is
sitaution
, I am of the opinion that it is better to find Correct your spelling
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coherence/cohesion
Consider proofreading to correct grammatical errors (e.g., 'whatif' should be 'what if', 'there always a solution' should be 'there is always a solution').
coherence/cohesion
Improve the logical flow by using more connecting words and phrases to link ideas and paragraphs.
task achievement
Ensure all main points are thoroughly supported by relevant examples and explanations to strengthen your arguments.
task achievement
Revise to ensure a balanced argument by giving equal weight to both perspectives before presenting your own viewpoint.
task achievement
Clarify and expand on certain sentences to avoid ambiguity and improve clarity.
introduction/conclusion
The introduction clearly states both viewpoints and the writer's position on the issue.
supported main points
The essay includes relevant examples to support the points discussed.
Fully explain your ideas
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- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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