nowadays, human activities can have a negative effect on the lives of
animals
and
plants
which may result in decreasing the
rate
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them. in my opinion,
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problems
come from deforestation and tourism
is much that can be done to
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problems
constructively.
to begin
with, there are a
lot
of reasons that have a negative effect on
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the
rate
of flora and funna.
firstly
,
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originated from deforestation. because in
this
materialistic lifestyle, not many people place a high value on protecting our ecosystems in order to save different types of innocent creatures and
plants
.
in other words
, a majority of individuals just focus on their profits for themselves to benefit from the advantage of the forest.
That is
why, tens of thousands of priceless trees are cut down to use in different aspects in order to make a
lot
of money
secondly
, tourism can
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a
lot
of
problems
for the
animals
and
plants
by putting pressure on the local resources because of constructing the facilities and infrastructures, like hotels on the untouched nature.
this
style can endanger the
of wild
animals
and a wide variety of
plants
.
however
, there are many ways to tackle these
problems
.the main responsibilities are on the shoulders of the government against deforestation. because governments can avoid
this
action by introducing stricter laws and measures.since when the people are aware of the long-term dire
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of their acts. they prefer to avoid
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.
Moreover
, to reduce the
rate
of negative impact on nature, we can protect
this
place by employing many people who are interested in wildlife conservation as volunteers.
this
way, doing a
lot
of environmentally friendly can be a key step to save
animals
and
plants
.
in conclusion, it is true that the problem of reducing the
rate
of flora and funna will probably not be solved quickly.
however
,
that is
not a reason to avoid taking action. government and many environmental friends can help to reduce the number of
animals
and
plants
.