In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent's absence. Discussion

The increasing trend of dual-income households in today's competitive world. So

both

of the

parents

have to go out for work

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if they do not do

this

. They will face financial challenges and

also

it is very hard to manage the expenses with the income of one person. The scope of my essay is to look at

both

perspectives. First and foremost, there are lots of benefits of additional income. With the help of

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dual-income

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anyone can give their children

better

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education.

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, good healthcare can

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to the family. They can go for vacations and

also

enjoy

extra curricular

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activities.

This

will help to maintain the

overall

stability.

Additionally

, if the income is high they can save some money for the future and minimise the monetary stress

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caused

due

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to lack of

low-income

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and more payments.

Furthermore

,

parents

are the role

model

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of their children. In

this

situation

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parents

manage

both

work and family duties to develop independence and responsibility. They become good examples in front of their

kids

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eyes. But the downside of

both

parents

working-lack of emotional support and academic help to their children. They rely on external caregivers,

whereas

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child

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his\her

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their

parental guidance.

On the other

hand

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parents

can use the

balance

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approach to

easily

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manage

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personal and professional

life

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easily. They can opt for flexible hours jobs and find

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opportunities

for

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the work from home and explore

the

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time management techniques.

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balance

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approach can mitigate the disadvantages

while

reatining

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retaining

the advantages of dual-income

household

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. In

colclusion

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conclusion

, I think the

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approach is

good

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option

to manage

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the working life

and

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also

parents

can keep the things in mind that their kids

needs

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emotional support so they will

there

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for them all the time with the help of management.