In some countries,it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age.Is this a positive or negative development?

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of

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countries

impose

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that impose

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a ban on

company

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companies

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which do not receive the

applicantion

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application

depend

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depending

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on age.

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author believes

this

is a negative phenomenon

due to

it has

big

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impact on the policy of

children

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power like

take

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advantage

of

children

and making

children

can not focus on study. It must be understood that

this

is a negative point when companies get the application from

children

.

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means in recent

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,there

are

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many people who

take

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advantage

from

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children

for

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the earn money purpose.

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,there are numerous

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parents who

told

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their

children

to do a job even

the

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weather

so

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hot or

rain

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heavily

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to bring up them

as well as

their parents.

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,

this

will lead to

take

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the

advantage

of

health

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of younger

and

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teenagers could be dangerous when

join in

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joining

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the

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harmful business or toxic environment. Another factor that

it

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is the drawback when

government

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the government

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allow teenagers to do any job even

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at their

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their

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young age.

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,

children

do not have

opportunity

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to go to school like each

others

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or they will

easy to

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fall behind

with

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their studies.Take those people to work their way through university

for

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instance,they can not put their one hundred

percent

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for

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the lesson.Result,they

easy to

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give up and drop out of college,

it

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will have a big impact on growth and

future

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. In conclusion,

this

is a negative development for companies to receive the applicant for their age since

have

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an

affect

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on younger.

Hence

,teenagers not only to easy to give up but

also

easy to

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easily

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take

advantage

from

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of

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adult

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adults

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.