The charts below show average age of men and women retired from work in 7 countries in 2004 and 2008.
The charts illustrate the information about the standard
age
of both genders in retiring from work in 7 different nations between 2004 and 2008.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of individuals retiring from work were Swedishes in 2008, whereas
, the opposite was true for those in italy
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Italy
Additionally
, there was a similarity in the average of male
and women Fix the agreement mistake
males
in
quitting jobs.
Examining for Change preposition
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further
detail, regarding the figure of male
, in 2008, the Fix the agreement mistake
males
age
of men quitting jobs in Sweden was 63.5, which was the highest among other countries, followed by the age
in 2004, by
63. There was a resemblance in the retired Change preposition
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age
of males in Germany and Denmark, at 60 and 61 over two separate years
, respectively. Moreover
, the figure for the age
of quitting jobs in the Netherlands in two different years
were 62 and 62,5, properly, which were higher by 1 and 1,5, compared to the UK. The tendency of retiring in Italy was the same in two years
, by 58, which was lower than France
by 1.5 and 1 respectively for 2 Change preposition
in France
years
.
Turning back to the remaining statistics, moving onto the chart of females, the trend of stopping working resembles the
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that
males
. It can obviously be observed that Swedish women had the highest standard Change preposition
of males
age
to quit a job in 2008, which was over 62, followed by the age
in 2004, by
62. Change preposition
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In contrast
, Italy still had the lowest age
as it was over 56 in 2004, after which it dropped to 56 in 2008. The Netherlands was in second place which was about 61 to 62 in a timeframe that lasted for 4 years
. Moreover
, over a period of four years
, the age
of German women started at over 58 to 60 in 2008, which had the same trend with
the UK, from 60 to 61. There was a small disparity in the Change preposition
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age
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years with synonyms.
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