Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure, and work activities. Do the advantages of information technology outweigh the drawbacks?
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ia
argued that Correct your spelling
is
people
's life
have significant changes Fix the agreement mistake
lives
due to
information
technology
that dominates over aspects such
as home
, leisure and work activities. This
essay will firstly
, discuss how information
technology
simplify
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simplifies
people
's life
as one of the main Fix the agreement mistake
lives
advantage
and Change to a plural noun
advantages
secondly
, how it can lead to laziness as one of the main disadvantages, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
One of the principle
advantagesCorrect your spelling
principal
,
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is, information
information
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that information
technology
makes population's
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the population's
life
easier. It means that,
many daily things could be done by programmed computers, robots or AI. With the help of Remove the comma
apply
information
technology
, a simple apartment could be a smart home
, work activities could be automated or leisure more interisting
. Correct your spelling
interesting
For instance
, Highvill is a smart block-apartment that has many advantages such
as a vacuum that cleans the home
by itself when nobody at
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is at
home
or curtains are self-opening at sunrise and close at sunset. It significantly helps people
to save time just by trusting to
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apply
technology
.
The main disadvantage associated with, people
can get lazy due to
inforamtion
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information
technology
that cover
almost all aspects of Change the verb form
covers
people
's lives. In other words
, people
do not use the whole potential brain opportunities while
working or having leisure time and it can lead to excessive addiction of
using things made by Change preposition
to
information
technology
. However
, information
technology
makes people
's life
more enjoyable and Fix the agreement mistake
lives
simplyfied
. As an example, there is Correct your spelling
simplified
the
remote robot station named Alisa with whom Correct article usage
a
people
can communicate, ask some
tips and Change preposition
for some
fulfill
particular commands. It is a communicative version of Google. Change the spelling
fulfil
As a result
, information
technology
still has a positive impact on society.
To sum up
, there is a domination of information
technology
over many aspects of people
's lives. Despite information
technology
make
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making
people
get lazy, it still helps to simplify things and save a lot of time. The advantages of information
technology
outweigh the drawbacks.Submitted by burtebaeva02 on
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