Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure, and work activities. Do the advantages of information technology outweigh the drawbacks?

It
ia
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is
argued that
people
's
life
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have significant changes
due to
information
technology
that dominates over aspects
such
as
home
, leisure and work activities.
This
essay will
firstly
, discuss how
information
technology
simplify
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people
's
life
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as one of the main
advantage
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and
secondly
, how it can lead to laziness as one of the main disadvantages, followed by a reasoned conclusion. One of the
principle
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advantages
,
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information
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that information
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technology
makes
population's
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life
easier. It means that
,
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many daily things could be done by programmed computers, robots or AI. With the help of
information
technology
, a simple apartment could be a smart
home
, work activities could be automated or leisure more
interisting
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interesting
.
For instance
, Highvill is a smart block-apartment that has many advantages
such
as a vacuum that cleans the
home
by itself when nobody
at
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home
or curtains are self-opening at sunrise and close at sunset. It significantly helps
people
to save time just by trusting
to
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technology
. The main disadvantage associated with,
people
can get lazy
due to
inforamtion
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information
technology
that
cover
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almost all aspects of
people
's lives.
In other words
,
people
do not use the whole potential brain opportunities
while
working or having leisure time and it can lead to excessive addiction
of
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using things made by
information
technology
.
However
,
information
technology
makes
people
's
life
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lives
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more enjoyable and
simplyfied
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simplified
. As an example, there is
the
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remote robot station named Alisa with whom
people
can communicate, ask
some
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tips and
fulfill
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particular commands. It is a communicative version of Google.
As a result
,
information
technology
still has a positive impact on society.
To sum up
, there is a domination of
information
technology
over many aspects of
people
's lives. Despite
information
technology
make
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people
get lazy, it still helps to simplify things and save a lot of time. The advantages of
information
technology
outweigh the drawbacks.
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