The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The alteration in the figure for
families
owning
cars
in a European nation from 1971 to 2001 is illustrated in the given bar chart. Generally ,
car
ownership rose during the
30 - year
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30-year
period.
Furthermore
, towards the end ,
families
with one
car
were significantly larger in comparison to those without or with 2
cars
. Looking first in 1971, half of the population did not own a
car
, compared to nearly 35% of
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and more than 15% of
families
with 2
cars
. By 1981, the percentage of households without
cars
largely decreased
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%,
while
one
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car
owners
also
dropped
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%. Those decreases corresponded with the notable increase of those with 2
cars
( rose more
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% ). Over the next decade, the most significant change was observed in the percentage of single-
car
families
, rising to reach the peak of 50%,
whereas
the opposite was true for those without
cars
or with 2
cars
, declining to roughly a third and more than 22%, in that order. In the final years, the gap between
no
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car
families
and those with 2
cars
became negligible ( 1%). Meanwhile, that figure for one-
car
households experienced a drop of 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, cars, car with synonyms.
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