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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
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 utilization for various
purposes
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 in several regions of the world.
Overall
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, the usage for agriculture is the highest in four
areas
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: South
America
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, Africa, Central
Asia
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, and South East
Asia
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. Meanwhile,
water
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 is consumed for industrial
purposes
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 the most in North
America
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 and Europe. In Central
Asia
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, Africa, South East
Asia
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, and South
America
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,
water
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 consumption for agriculture significantly accounts for 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71%, respectively.
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, neither industrial
use
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 nor domestic
use
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 of
water
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 exceeds 10% in these
areas
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, except for industrial
use
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 in
South East
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Southeast
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Asia
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 and domestic
use
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 in South
America
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. Compared to those four
areas
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, North
America
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 and Europe consume
water
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 differently. In both
areas
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,
water
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 is used for industry at around 50%, followed by usage for agriculture, which accounts for about one-third. The remaining proportion of
water
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 usage is for domestic
purposes
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.
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, North
America
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 consumes 5% less
water
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 for industrial
purposes
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 compared to Europe.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, purposes, areas, america, asia, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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