Some people think that the best way for the government to solve the problem of traffic congestion in cities is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?
A large majority of individuals believe that offering full-time public
transport
without fee is the most workable solution to address the issue of Use synonyms
traffic
jams in cities. I disagree with Use synonyms
this
statement because Linking Words
this
method puts pressure on the national burden and there are Linking Words
also
some feasible ways to tackle Linking Words
this
problem.
It must be acknowledged that government must invest a huge amount of money in maintaining Linking Words
this
service. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
traffic
congestion just occurs in rush hours when a large number of Use synonyms
vehicle
are on the Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
road
, which means that Use synonyms
this
solution is unnecessary and underused in the remaining time of the day. Linking Words
Therefore
, in Linking Words
long-term
period, Add an article
a long-term
this
will put Linking Words
financial
burden on society that leads to Add an article
a financial
the financial
lack
of national budget Correct article usage
a lack
on
key fields Change preposition
for
such
as education, healthcare, environment, industry, politics or national Linking Words
defense
. Change the spelling
defence
At
a result, Change preposition
As
this
measure can just insignificantly deal with Linking Words
traffic
issues Use synonyms
while
it Linking Words
put
a lot of risk on Wrong verb form
puts
national
Correct article usage
the national
budgetary
.
Another point that should take into consideration is that there are Replace the word
budget
also
some feasible ways to solve the problem of Linking Words
traffic
congestion in cities Use synonyms
such
as making public Linking Words
transport
more Use synonyms
favored
and upgrading the Change the spelling
favoured
road
systems. It is believed that making public Use synonyms
transport
more attractive by improving its quality, opening more departures in peak time to avoid fully-packed and Use synonyms
ensure
Wrong verb form
ensuring
passenger’s
safety can encourage people to use it which is more practical than providing it without charge. Change noun form
passenger
Moreover
, the improvement of Linking Words
road
systems can Use synonyms
noticably
handle Correct your spelling
noticeably
Linking Words
this
issues as it provide a better condition for Correct determiner usage
these
commuter
on the Fix the agreement mistake
commuters
road
and Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
minimize
incidents that may occur Correct subject-verb agreement
minimizes
due to
Linking Words
road
quality. Use synonyms
Thus
, these methods are more economical than offering free public Linking Words
transport
full-time.
In conclusion, reducing Use synonyms
traffic
congestion by providing free public transportation 24/7 is impractical as it Use synonyms
put
Wrong verb form
puts
Correct article usage
a financially
financially
burden on Change the adverb
financial
government
and there are some solutions that Correct article usage
the government
more
viable to tackle Add a missing verb
are more
this
problem.Linking Words
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