Some people think that the best way for the government to solve the problem of traffic congestion in cities is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

A large majority of individuals believe that offering full-time public

transport

without fee is the most workable solution to address the issue of

traffic

jams in cities. I disagree with

this

statement because

this

method puts pressure on the national burden and there are

also

some feasible ways to tackle

this

problem. It must be acknowledged that government must invest a huge amount of money in maintaining

this

service.

However

,

traffic

congestion just occurs in rush hours when a large number of

vehicle

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are on the

road

, which means that

this

solution is unnecessary and underused in the remaining time of the day.

Therefore

, in

long-term

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period,

this

will put

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burden on society that leads to

lack

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of national budget

on

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key fields

such

as education, healthcare, environment, industry, politics or national

defense

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.

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a result,

this

measure can just insignificantly deal with

traffic

issues

while

it

put

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a lot of risk on

national

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budgetary

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. Another point that should take into consideration is that there are

also

some feasible ways to solve the problem of

traffic

congestion in cities

such

as making public

transport

more

favored

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and upgrading the

road

systems. It is believed that making public

transport

more attractive by improving its quality, opening more departures in peak time to avoid fully-packed and

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passenger’s

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safety can encourage people to use it which is more practical than providing it without charge.

Moreover

, the improvement of

road

systems can

noticably

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noticeably

handle

this

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issues as it provide a better condition for

commuter

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on the

road

and

also

minimize

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incidents that may occur

due to

road

quality.

Thus

, these methods are more economical than offering free public

transport

full-time. In conclusion, reducing

traffic

congestion by providing free public transportation 24/7 is impractical as it

put

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a financially

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financially

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burden on

government

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and there are some solutions that

more

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are more

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viable to tackle

this

problem.