The charts below show what UK postgraduates and graduate students who did not get a full-time work did after leaving collegue in 2008
The given bar charts compare the numbers of graduates and postgraduates in the UK who did not get a full-time job and chose to do
after
graduating from college in 2008.
It is obvious that the number of graduates was significantly higher than that of postgraduates in each category. Rephrase
so after
In addition
, further
study was the most common choice, as opposed to the
voluntary Correct article usage
apply
work
was the least,for both student groups, during the period shown.
In 2008, nearly 30000 students
went into further
study, while
the figures for those choosing voluntary work
was ten times lower, at 3500. The students
who got a part-time job were almost the same as their unemployed counterparts, at close to 17700 and over 16200 respectively.
Postgraduates saw a similar pattern. There were approximately 300 students
chose
to do unpaid Correct pronoun usage
who chose
work
, which was the least common decision. The most popular destinations for this
group were further
study and part-time work
, at slightly above 2700 and around 2530 respectively. Additionally
, more than 1600 students
are unemployed after leaving college.Submitted by picolodeptrai123 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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