The charts below show what UK postgraduates and graduate students who did not get a full-time work did after leaving collegue in 2008
The given bar charts compare the numbers of graduates and postgraduates in the UK who did not get a full-time job and chose to do
after
graduating from college in 2008.
It is obvious that the number of graduates was significantly higher than that of postgraduates in each category. Rephrase
so after
In addition
, Linking Words
further
study was the most common choice, as opposed to Linking Words
the
voluntary Correct article usage
apply
work
was the least,for both student groups, during the period shown.
In 2008, nearly 30000 Use synonyms
students
went into Use synonyms
further
study, Linking Words
while
the figures for those choosing voluntary Linking Words
work
was ten times lower, at 3500. The Use synonyms
students
who got a part-time job were almost the same as their unemployed counterparts, at close to 17700 and over 16200 respectively.
Postgraduates saw a similar pattern. There were approximately 300 Use synonyms
students
Use synonyms
chose
to do unpaid Correct pronoun usage
who chose
work
, which was the least common decision. The most popular destinations for Use synonyms
this
group were Linking Words
further
study and part-time Linking Words
work
, at slightly above 2700 and around 2530 respectively. Use synonyms
Additionally
, more than 1600 Linking Words
students
are unemployed after leaving college.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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