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You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. -Write a letter to your friend.

#visit #friend #england #event #home #change #dates #-write
Dear Amanda, I hope
this
 letter finds you in good condition and
high
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 spirits. I was so excited to see in next week but unfortunately, I
got
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have
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 some crucial
proceeding
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proceedings
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 at home.
Therefore
, I had to postpone my visit to England for another month. Actually, yesterday I became aware that my relative is undergoing a significant medical procedure, and I feel it is imperative for me to be there to support
during
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you during
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this
 challenging time.
Nonetheless
, I am disappointed that I have to defer our plan.
Hopefully
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 I will be unoccupied next month and even if I’m not I will drop all my
works
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. I apologize for any
distruption
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disruption
this
 may cause to your schedule.
However
, I
aspire
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 you understand my situation. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Love, Jane
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grammar
Ensure that all sentences are grammatically correct for a smooth reading experience. For example, 'I was so excited to see in next week' should be 'I was so excited to see you next week.'
spelling
Double-check for minor spelling errors such as 'distruption' which should be 'disruption.'
tone
The tone of the letter is very friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.
task achievement
You provided a clear reason for postponing the visit and offered genuine regret for the inconvenience caused.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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