The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps show the main changes which have taken
place
in the central library from 20 years ago until now. In general,it can be seen that the library has become Use synonyms
a
much more modern and categorized .Correct article usage
apply
Also
, its central space has become less crowded .
One interesting change is that some food possibilities have been added ,including a café Linking Words
in
the right side of Change preposition
on
entrance
,which Add an article
the entrance
it
was Correct pronoun usage
apply
a
enquiry desk Change the article
an
previosly
, and a Self-service Correct your spelling
previously
machines
Fix the agreement mistake
machine
front
Change preposition
in front
the
café.
The children's book has been transported to a bigger Change preposition
of the
place
with Use synonyms
sofa
and Correct article usage
a sofa
a
space for storytelling events and a lecture room has been constructed Remove the article
apply
instead
of Linking Words
previous
children's book.
There were two big tables and chairs in the Correct article usage
the previous
center
of the library which have been removed in terms Change the spelling
centre
of having
more free space .The reading room has been replaced with Change preposition
to have
computer
room.
The Correct article usage
a computer
place
which Use synonyms
were
the Change the verb form
was
place
of adult fiction books ,has turned into a Use synonyms
place
for all Use synonyms
refrences
Correct your spelling
references
reference
book
.wereFix the agreement mistake
books
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