The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts provide information about the changes

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employment

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rate, which is

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accompanied

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, in the UK between 1988 and 2012. Looking

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perspective,

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the majority proportion of hiring occupies males' full-time jobs.

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, the lowest one belongs to

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part-time types in both years. It is evident that in 1988,

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tendency towards full-time occupations

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higher than

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part-time

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ones.

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, as men's preferences towards full-time jobs

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high, the rate of part-time occupations

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more popular among women in 1988. It is

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that the ratio of men's employment in full-time jobs decreased dramatically from 53% in 1988

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to 47% in 2012.

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, part-time males' employment came down slightly over these years.

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, Females'

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completely changed over these years. Females' hiring priority changed to full-time occupations, which rose 7%. In stark contrast, the part-time types went down from 22% to 20%.