The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the
blue print
of a public library in the span of twenty years.
Correct your spelling
blueprint
Overall
, the structure of the library building remained the same. However
, there are significant transformation
Fix the agreement mistake
transformations
for
the utilization of roomsChange preposition
in
,
and an enlarged Remove the comma
apply
room
to
the Change preposition
in
hall
area. Some furnitures
were Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
also
removed and replaced by new ones.
20 years ago, the centre of the room
were
decorated with a couple of tables and chairs. In the main Change the verb form
was
hall
, adult fiction bookshelves
were located on the left side
of the wing and adult non-fiction bookshelves
on the opposite. On the top of the map, CDs, videos, and computer games room
were placed on the left and children's
books Correct article usage
the children's
room
in
the top Add a missing verb
was in
right
corner. Right
across the children's books room
were the enquiry desks, which were also
by the right
side
of the entrance. Meanwhile on the left side
of the entrance, was a reading room
for newspapers and magazines.
Today, the centre of the room
is cleared up to make room
for all references
Change the noun form
reference
bookshelves
on the left hall
and adult fiction bookshelves
, an information desk, and self-service machines are added on the right
side
of the hall
. On the top of the floor plan, a room
located in the left corner is expanded to fit two large sofas for storytelling events and children's fiction bookshelves
. While
in the top right
corner, the room
is utilized for lectures. Lastly
, located near the entrance is a computer room
sitting on the left, and a café on the right
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, hall, bookshelves, side, right with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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