The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the
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of a public library in the span of twenty years.
Overall
, the structure of the library building remained the same.
However
, there are significant
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for
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the utilization of rooms
,
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and an enlarged
room
to
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in
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the
hall
area. Some
furnitures
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furniture
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were
also
removed and replaced by new ones. 20 years ago, the centre of the
room
were
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decorated with a couple of tables and chairs. In the main
hall
, adult fiction
bookshelves
were located on the left
side
of the wing and adult non-fiction
bookshelves
on the opposite. On the top of the map, CDs, videos, and computer games
room
were placed on the left and
children's
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books
room
in
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the top
right
corner.
Right
across the children's books
room
were the enquiry desks, which were
also
by the
right
side
of the entrance. Meanwhile on the left
side
of the entrance, was a reading
room
for newspapers and magazines. Today, the centre of the
room
is cleared up to make
room
for all
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bookshelves
on the left
hall
and adult fiction
bookshelves
, an information desk, and self-service machines are added on the
right
side
of the
hall
. On the top of the floor plan, a
room
located in the left corner is expanded to fit two large sofas for storytelling events and children's fiction
bookshelves
.
While
in the top
right
corner, the
room
is utilized for lectures.
Lastly
, located near the entrance is a computer
room
sitting on the left, and a café on the
right
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, hall, bookshelves, side, right with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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