The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago nad how it looks like now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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Over 20 years, the floor display of a public
library
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has changed a lot.
Overall
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, two round tables and multiple chairs have disappeared.
Also
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, now the
library
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has four rooms with a new information desk which is located in a hall on the right side unlike having three rooms in the past.
Firstly
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, when you entered the entrance and turned left in the past, there was a reading
room
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where you could read newspapers and magazines.
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, now it has changed to a computer
room
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, where you can use computers. In the opposite direction of the computer
room
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, now there is a cafe where you can have a cup of coffee, which location was once an enquiry desk. In the left hall of the
library
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, there are all reference books now. But in the past, there were many adult fiction books positioned.
At the end
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of the hallway, there are two rooms on both sides now and
then
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. One
in
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the left is now used as a children's fiction book
room
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. In the
room
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there are two sofas, and occasionally storytelling events are held here.
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about 20 years ago there were multiple CDs, videos and computer games were located
at
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in
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the same
room
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. Across the hallway, now we can find a lecture
room
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at the right corner of the
library
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, which was once used as a location for children's books.
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, when you step out of the lecture
room
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, there is an information desk and three self-service machines in the hall.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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