The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the two pie charts illustrate the UK
workers
with time in 1988 and 2012, Overall
, meal workers
(full-time) have the highest percentage and the number of workers
in both years, Conversely
, meal (part-time) workers
have the lowest ratio and number in both years, females and meals made up the two biggest employees in 1988 and 2012.
According to
the information, In 1988 men(full-time) had the 53% the highest percentage, But they came down to 47%. On the other hand
female(full-time) percentage has dropped from 19% to 26% in 47%, According to
the numbers males (full-time) have increased from 12,539 to 13,794. Also
, females (full-time) have increased from 4,482 to 7,696.
Moving further
, men(part-time) had a slight increase from 6% to 7% by the number 1,550 to 2,131, and females(part-time) had a decrease from 22% to 20% in 2012, According to
the numbers 5,268 to 5,979 we can notice a small reduction.Submitted by reemaljuaidi8 on
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