The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the two pie charts illustrate the UK

workers

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with time in 1988 and 2012,

Overall

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, meal

workers

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(full-time) have the highest percentage and the number of

workers

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in both years,

Conversely

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, meal (part-time)

workers

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have the lowest ratio and number in both years, females and meals made up the two biggest employees in 1988 and 2012.

According to

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the information, In 1988 men(full-time) had the 53% the highest percentage, But they came down to 47%.

On the other hand

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female(full-time) percentage has dropped from 19% to 26% in 47%,

According to

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the numbers males (full-time) have increased from 12,539 to 13,794.

Also

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, females (full-time) have increased from 4,482 to 7,696. Moving

further

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, men(part-time) had a slight increase from 6% to 7% by the number 1,550 to 2,131, and females(part-time) had a decrease from 22% to 20% in 2012,

According to

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the numbers 5,268 to 5,979 we can notice a small reduction.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

151 words

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The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.

Blood sports have become a hot topic for debate in recent years. As society develops it is increasingly seen as an uncivilized activity and cruel to the helpless animals that are killed. All blood sports should be banned. Discuss the main arguments for this statement and give your own opinion.

Many different countries have most shops and products as the same. Some consider it a positive development, whereas others consider it negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion.